Screenplays & Screenwriting Resources: The Screenwriter’s Bible by David Trottier – Reviewed

April 27th, 2009

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I’ve read a few books on screenwriting now, the largest and heaviest of which has been The Screenwriter’s Bible by David Trottier. The book isn’t that long or wordy, so much as the print and the physical pages are large.

I guess a big, heavy, large print book seems more authoritative then and small little print one. It does make a noticeable difference for a traveling expat screenwriter though.

Anyway the “Bible” is billed as six books in one: a screenwriting primer, a screenwriting workbook, a formatting guide, a spec writing guide, a sales and marketing guide, and finally a screenwriter’s resource guide.

I would absolutely recommend this book.

I can’t think of anything I have against this book, other than I can tell David Trottier isn’t a fanatic about three act structure, a lot of people aren’t, I am however not one of those, so I would have to recommend another book (probably The Complete Idiot’s Guide to Screenwriting by Skip Press) to really drive the three act structure concept home.

The other strange thing about reading so many screenwriting “guru” books is that everyone wants to coin their own vocabulary, as a result certain concepts get named and renamed and named again. Is it twist, plot point, turning point, etc.?

This is where the book excels over the other books I’ve read: the primer, the formatting guide, and the sales & marketing guide.

It will clear up any misconceptions about what and why you should be writing a “spec” script as oppose to all the shooting scripts you download from the Internet.

As basic as it sounds I actually gained a lot from this, older screenplays and shooting scripts have such a different style (camera direction, etc.) it’s hard not let those bleed into your writing.

I feel that this book cleared up some of the basic misconceptions I had about what is a screenplay.

The formatting guide is great for reference. While there is no absolutely correct way of formatting, Trottier’s guide is a quick and easy way for finding industry-accepted techniques.

He makes it easy to reference by boiling everything down into a three-page screenplay. Get familiar with those three pages and you’ll be set for your own application of those techniques.

Lastly, his sales and marketing guide is like nothing else I have seen. He lists concrete steps to take after finishing your screenplay.

Reading this section is inspiring, at least in that there will be something to do with your screenplay after it is written.

This book is strong on basics and I recommend it to everyone.

-J Roland Kelly

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Screenwriting & Filmmaking: More about the Oncoming Real 3D Revolution

March 31st, 2009

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Last year I wrote about going to see Journey to the Center of the Earth because it was in new Real 3D and I wanted to see what all the talk was about.

I then quickly added myself to the bandwagon of people who believed this new 3D was going to change filmmaking forever.

What I didn’t know is how far along this was getting, I read an interview with Steven Spielberg, Peter Jackson, and James Cameron.

What they had to say surprised even me.

First let me say, if asked to come up with three filmmakers that I like the least, it probably would be this trio, but this group does represent the top of mainstream filmmaking, which makes what they had to say even more remarkable…

All of them have big budget 3D films currently in production, all of them believe that 3D is the future, and James Cameron went as far as to say that he would never make a movie in 2D again.

On a side note there is apparently a way to take a current 2D movie and turn it into 3D with a lot of money and computer power. So…

James Cameron is currently working on a re-release of a 3D version of Titanic, and even George Lucas wants to re-re-release the Star Wars films in 3D.

Here is why the industry likes 3D… the theaters can charge more money for a ticket, the films can’t be bootlegged as easily (good for the Hollywood moneymen), but James Cameron stressed an interesting third point… and I wonder how much research has been done on this… he said seeing something in 3D draws from real memories in the brain differently than something in 2D.

That is 3D draws you into the storytelling process more effectively than 2D.

From what I know, I would guess he is right. In fact this 3D development could be the beginning of a larger concept of virtual reality entertainment.

If you haven’t seen one of these films yet I recommend you do, you will see that this new 3D doesn’t get in the way of the story at all, it might actually emphasize it.

One of the biggest tests of this new filmmaking development will occur this winter when Cameron releases Avatar, currently the largest production of a 3D film to date.

The film is not finished but Cameron has already spent more than $200 million, and more than 1000 people have worked on it.

Who is this guy?

And who keeps giving him money?

It will have to be these mainstream filmmakers that push the boundaries of this new medium, they are the only ones with that kind of bank, but I object to productions of this magnitude.

…100 well financed independent films or one film by James Cameron…

I hope it flops.

It might actually, because if 3D is the only hook for this film, then the worldwide receipts are going to be slim.

Hollywood is having enough trouble getting theaters in the United States to switch to digital projectors that can show 3D, the rest of the world right now… forget it.

The worldwide market was a huge source of income for Titanic, I remember seeing Titanic candy bars for sale in Lithuania.

I’m sure it will be released in 2D and it might be ok.

But did I mention that he is re-releasing Titanic, I’m going to hope for the worst.

-J Roland Kelly

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Recommended Things To Do When You Are Staring Down Screenwriter’s Block In Quito, Ecuador: Bike the Ciclopaseo

March 17th, 2009

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On the second and last Sunday of every month, Quito closes its main drag (the Avenida Amazonas) to all traffic but bikes.

Usually this city is not a bicycle friendly city, the traffic, the mountains, the pollution, etc. but on two days a month everything changes.

Suddenly everyone is on a bike, the city provides water stops along the main route, which extends from the south of Quito all the way to the airport in the north.

I “borrowed” a kid’s bike from a kid in the center of the Parque La Alemeda and rode all the way to the airport.

This is a great way to see Quito, you will pass through El Centro, the Mariscal Sucre, and Parque La Carolina all before watching a plane take off or land at the airport because the route goes right by the runway.

Everyone stops, drinks from their water bottle, watches one plane by the runway and then heads back.

I recommend this for tourists or expats alike. I did it two Sundays ago on Women’s day and it rocked.

I did return the bike.

-J Roland Kelly

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J Roland Kelly Wins Over Mountain View, California Hometown Crowd Over 65 and the Unemployed With Photo Taken In Otavalo, Ecuador

March 6th, 2009
Another Photo taken at the same time

Another photo taken at the Otavalo market

A photo of me that was taken in Otavalo, Ecuador back at the beginning of October was published today in the Mountain View Voice; that being the Mountain View in California, home of Google, and my old place of residence.

I was in Otavalo (three hours north of Quito) to visit the famous indigenous market. The market dates to pre-Incan times and is still a big deal even if it is a bit touristy, you can read about the history of the Otavalo market here.

You can see the online version of today’s Mountain View Voice here, just search for “postcard” to find my picture.

The girls are not wearing costumes that is everyday attire, they were well educated, spoke some English, and had email addresses, and I am not going to lie, I gave them five bucks for ice cream.

Thanks to Diane Martin at the Mountain View Voice for choosing my photo.

-J Roland Kelly

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Screenwriting and Screenplay Contests: Tips, Tricks & Getting Feedback

February 26th, 2009

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I don’t enter many contests but NYC Midnight puts on this event every year, sponsored by Final Draft, that I enter. I just signed up again, this will be my third time.

It’s not a typical screenwriting contest, here’s how it works.

They assign you to a heat with specific topic and genre for example, Mother & science fiction, and then you have one week to write a 15-page screenplay.

The best few from each heat go to round two (about 30 people) where everyone gets the same topic and genre and you have to write another 15-page screenplay in 24 hours.

The best part about this contest is the forum that you can choose to post your screenplay entry into after the end of each round; mostly it’s amateurs, and mostly everyone is kind.

I have received a lot of good feed back every time I have posted one of my screenplays in the forum.

Here is what I have learned. Most of the good screenplays are expressionist. They try to focus on a single emotion, usually about something real personal.

15 pages isn’t long enough to develop a whole lot of story so if you can convey an emotion, you have done something.

Most of the people who participate in the forum are amateurs. Most of the people who win the contest are not beginners, and they do not participate in the forum, so it seems like most of the winners come out of nowhere.

This is okay.

It’s still a good exercise to force yourself to write on a given topic, and the fee for entering the contest is very low.

Totally worth it, I recommend this contest.

-J Roland Kelly

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Screenwriting & Filmmaking: Two Film Ideas – a place where everyone lives to 100 & a guy who loses his manhood

February 10th, 2009

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If anyone needs ideas, here are two that I will never use.

First, in true reality, there’s this town in Ecuador close to Peru called Loja where an abnormal amount of people live past 100 years of age.

I know a girl whose grandmother is from Loja and I bought ice cream for her 94th birthday; she’s still going strong.

But no one knows why. What is it about this town? Is it the mountain air, diet & healthy living, maybe it’s aliens (good or bad), maybe just the CIA?

It could start as a romantic comedy and then go aliens.

If you figure it out, let me know.

The other idea, and this is so obvious that it has to have been done already, but I can’t think of a example…

A guy… a normal guy… and then out of nowhere he loses his penis… an accident… I don’t know…

So what happens to the guy?

Does he become a serial killer? Is he able to push through it? Is he middle aged, and doesn’t like to fcuk his wife anyway?

It could be a heart-warming story about a guy who shows us all that life is magical and can endure anything.

Or he could kill every swinging dick in his apartment complex.

Maybe, he kills women because he can’t find any release, or maybe he finds the healthy relationship with a woman that he always needed.

I promise you this, every single guy has thought about this. If you add a female character, as in the partner then you have story that applies to every single person on this planet.

That’s one hell of a built in audience.

Just think of me when that beautiful bank teller is staring you down.

-J Roland Kelly

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Macintosh Sales, Service, & Repair in Ecuador: Quito is a Mac Friendly Screenwriting Town

February 1st, 2009

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I’m still in Quito, and recently my MacBook Pro failed to recharge. The problem was the Magsafe power adaptor, which by all accounts is the weak link in the Apple’s notebook line.

I read online that Magsafe Power Adaptors are so prone to failure that Apple is now replacing them free of charge at the genius bar in Apple stores.

Quito. Sh!t. The closest genius bar is in Miami. What’s a poor expat screenwriter to do?

Apple doesn’t even officially sell notebooks in South America. No hope. And yet… Enter Act III.

I remember seeing a pseudo Mac store at a Yuppie mall here by a movie theater called Cinemark. You’ll find it, just get in a taxi and say “Cinemark.” The official address:

MundoMac

Plaza de las Americas Local 6 exterior

Av. America Y NNUU

Tel: 3318472-3318490

www.mundomac.com.ec

Really over priced. The owner imports everything himself with tremendous mark up and then with the IVA tax here it pretty much is double the price.

The $75 dollar adaptor would have been $150. My Mac is under warranty so a guy at the store (Patricio) pointed me to a certified Apple repair place in Quito at:

AppTek

Republica 189 Y Diego de Almagro

Edificio El Triangulo Local 116

Quito – Ecuador

Tel:  593-2 290 9082 

I went there late on a Wednesday afternoon. The guy took some information from my computer and said come back Friday morning.

In 36 hours I had a new, completely free 85w Magsafe power adaptor.

Props to Apple’s worldwide warranty; jeers to Apple for selling an inferior and faulty product. Most of the computers I see tourists carrying around are now Macbooks.

As Apple fills more and more niche markets worldwide with notebooks they need to step it up.

Otherwise plan B for me was to take the broken power adapter to the broken TV store on my street and make hand signs for soldering iron.

F that.

-J Roland Kelly

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Songwriting & Indie Music: J Roland Kelly Marshals Against Karl Rove is released

January 20th, 2009

Today is the last possible day (and the safest) to release a political charged song about the Bush administration, while still technically under the Bush administration.

So, I give you… J Roland Kelly Marshals Against Karl Rove.

I’m not sure who would argue that there’s been any good political music about the chaos of the last eight years, so I thought I would try my hand.

And over the last few months, I’ve written a number of blog posts about the new use of Audio to MIDI in independent music, and I was anxious for a chance to apply what I learned.

This is my first song released as a single, and I’ve been curious to experiment with the single format.

Anyway, enjoy, and good luck to the United States and the new President.

- J Roland Kelly

P.S. You can buy J Roland Kelly Marshals Against Karl Rove here.

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Screenwriting, Filmmaking, Storytelling & Life: The Hypocrisy of Film, How to Tell a Violent Story, & Why Never to Save an Attorney in Film, Plus J Roland Kelly Calls For the Resignation of James Bond and Batman

January 12th, 2009

James Bond

The hypocrisy of film works like this… in an epic for example… a peaceful society… suddenly gets attacked by an evil society (usually one-dimensional evil society).

We as an audience always follow a group of people from the peaceful society who chose to fight the evil society; this is Star Wars, Lord of the Rings, Beowulf, etc.

Why this format? Well, we as human beings want to live vicariously through a story full of action (read violence), but we have to rationalize this by adding black and white elements… The good guys are always the one-dimensional peaceful guys (who don’t want to fight, but you know, have to), the bad guys aren’t.

This makes it possible to enjoy a violent story. If the story were about the bad guys or simply two hours of people attacking each other, only a few of the odder people out there could stomach it.

The hypocrisy is that the reason why we are in the theater at all is because we like violence. That’s just how it works; another example…

I remember seeing a movie poster for a documentary about the Asian sex slave trade. The poster was of a scantily clad Asian girl chained in the corner of a room.

HOT!

That’s entertainment (hypocrisy)! Who doesn’t want a sex slave?

You show me a scantily clad Asian girl in chains, and depending on my current level of self-esteem, I’ll show you the price of admission.

What makes all this hot subject matter possible in mixed company is by putting it in the context of a documentary about white slavery.

It is just drama; pure hypocrisy.

The black and white elements need to be present, for the story to be stomach-able.

I have noticed recently that Hollywood is “f”ing this up, a la the new James Bond, Quantum of Solace and the newest Batman, The Dark Knight.

Hollywood in an attempt to address complicated modern times (George W. Bush’s mess) is trying to soften the black & white (good & evil) elements needed in violent storytelling.

The story then falls apart.

I like Hollywood because with MOST multi-million dollar stories, at least 100 really talented storytellers look at the story from 100 different angles and fix it.

James Bond and Batman fail.

In Quantum of Solace, James Bond is presented with an elder retired spy who tells James how difficult it is sometimes to know the difference between the good guys and the bad guys.

Then that spy is killed leaving James… the archetype of the grim fighting hero whose troubles are always private.

This is bullsh!t. James Bond can’t drive from point A to point B without causing four fatalities. You put him in a gray world and he is a common murder.

In the film, I think it’s telling that they have to make the Latin American dictator a rapist. It makes no sense in the grand scheme of the film, but otherwise the audience would feel bad him when James Bond’s chicky kills him.

He’s just a pawn in a game, and why am I watching a story about an entire spy network needed to take down one South American rapist?

I hate James Bond. I present him as the character, who has had the most negative impact in the real world.

Spy networks don’t work. Spy vs. spy doesn’t work. Fcuk the CIA. Worldwide Intelligence in real life is a fraud.

James Bond is a throw back to the Cold War and needs to be retired. Modern world politics has moved on, and James Bond is a liability.

I resent most, the people in power, who think James Bond is real i.e. effeminate males trying to play him, such as Henry Kissinger, Donald Rumsfeld, George W., etc.

James Bond your services are no longer needed. Bugger off.

The thesis of this entire rant is that the black & white elements of storytelling need to be present for violent (action) stories.

Batman: The Dark Knight was also a story that fell apart when they storytellers went from black & white to grey.

In the film, the Joker gives Batman a choice between saving his love interest, or the prosecuting attorney in Gotham for all the bad guys.

Batman chooses the lawyer (never save a lawyer), the girl dies, the lawyer goes on a killing spree because his love interest was the same dead girl, then Batman takes the heat for the prosecuting attorney and goes into a hunted exile, because he believes that Gotham needs to believe that the prosecuting attorney was a hero.

Damn, who is this self sacrificing Jesus who won’t die? They call him Batman.

If Batman just chose to save his girlfriend (never save a lawyer) then the prosecuting attorney would have died a hero’s death, and all of this could have been avoided. Or, he could have simply told the truth and got credit for the capturing the Joker.

This is a terrible story. The irony is not lost on me that The Dark Knight has been one of the more financially successful Batman films, do to the untimely death of Heath Ledger.

Still, it is bad storytelling.

Hollywood, lately feels it can violate 3000 years of storytelling structure because of the political failure of one presidential administration. It can’t.

Hollywood, recognize.

-J Roland Kelly

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The American Military is using the two wars to import illicit drugs into the United States.

January 4th, 2009

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A.K.A… New Year Prediction: Conspiracy Theory Post #1

What am I basing this on? Nothing, but intuition really.

I hear reports from my old hometown that the place is now full of organic uppers and downers… that being the kind that you can’t grow in the National Forest (like normal god fearing people).

It used to be a really nice booze and weed town.

How is this possible with all the new Homeland B.S. (Border Security)?

Someone with special ability has to be working on the side.

In the past there has always been a direct correlation between military activity abroad and the flow of illicit drugs into the United States… Air America (CIA) importing heroin during Vietnam or the CIA flooding African-American communities with coke/crack during Iran-Contra… both of which are no longer conspiracy theories.

I don’t hear people talking about this, but I suspect it’s no different now, so my prediction (trying to be unique) this year is that there will be a large scandal in the next five years in which the military, an independent military contractor, or someone more clandestine will be caught having thrown an illegal fund raiser during the war.

Blogging is fun.

That, and I have it on reliable sources that bad aliens are in control of this planet this year.

Good luck to us all.

- J Roland Kelly

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