Tag: Filmmaking

Screenwriting Cross Training: Picking up Additional Skills of Filmmaking by Animating, Directing, and Editing a Written Scene, Social Media Gurus, Jean-Luc Godard Sleeping with Charlie Kaufman, and a Hopeful Future for Storytellers

Posted by – January 20, 2010

I’ve found a way for a screenwriter to quickly and painlessly animate a simple scene…

When running in old circles a month ago, I came across this comic computer-animated video from Markham Nolan showing the very delicate soft sell technique of a true social media professional.

How NOT to be a Social Media Guru

At the end is an ad for the technology that was used to create the animation.

I looked into it.

The text-to-movie technology from Xtranormal is billed as so easy if you can type, you can make movies, and it took two seconds before I decided to animate a scene from one of my screenplays.

I picked a scene; it’s one of my firsts but a favorite… so keep reading.

Animating it turned out to be really beneficial, it increased my understanding of what others are doing when they interpret my writing, and in the process I learned something about the language of editing.

It’s always best to be able to explain your vision in terms that other people in the production chain understand.

For a screenwriter who is still trying to increase their power to visualize a scene, I can see how animating something that they’ve written could really help.

With almost no effort this software allows you to create a computer-generated set with computer-generated actors to talk out simple scenes.

The online version of the software (which I recommend for its simplicity) is a little limited, as is real life, and even that’s a great lesson as there will always be a space between a script and its fruition.

In the last year, I’ve tried to learn a little about some of the peripheral arts around screenwriting. I’ve read books on acting, directing, editing, etc. and amazingly it all came into play even at this simplistic level.

Concepts like looking for emotion on a character’s face (or lack of it), knowing that some lines should be given while some should be received, and different ideas about editing for continuity when arranging shots were really brought home for me during this little exercise.

And remember the lesson was free.

One of the biggest filmmaking ideas I came to understand was the director’s concept of “coverage,” basically getting enough footage for editing; something as simple as three takes, three different ways, from three different angles.

This is the magical time when you find out everything your film will NOT be.

As great and as perfect as you think your story might be in screenplay form, it must take on substance sometime.

Godard is quoted as saying “editing is the transformation of chance into destiny.”

The online version of the software only allows for a limited number of camera angles, it’s about ten but that’s more coverage than you could probably expect in the real world.

This allows for the aspiring filmmaker to experiment.  After getting close-ups, shots from the waist up, over the shoulder shots, even some Dutch angles, it’s possible to change the script, and instantly have perfect reshoots from all angles.

Animating a scene from a project with this software is a fast and inexpensive way of developing or finding a style.

Many years ago I saw La Passion de Jeanne d’Arc, a film by Carl Theodor Dreyer from way back in 1928. I recommend it to all. As the title suggests the film is extremely emotional, a lot of tight close-ups of people crying.

Someone in the DVD extras explains that this is ironic because Dreyer went to great expense to build elaborate sets, only to draw the focus away with tight close-ups.

I thought well… why not save a few bucks on the set and just shoot close ups?

The establishing shot is the answer.

Most people with even a passing interest in film have heard these terms, but until you actually edit a film, it’s difficult to understand the power that they hold.

The audience feels uncomfortable not knowing where they are, even if the action is engaging.

It’s true on the screen; it’s true on the page.

Back to my little scene, arranged as a short film now: it’s about the role of third parties in the sexual fantasy life of couples.

I was going for a 50 year old La Nouvelle Vague, over saturated, deep focus, sort of a Jean-Luc Godard meets Charlie Kaufman but animated in 1 minute and 52 seconds affair.

I give you Sleeping with Charlie Kaufman.

Kaufman’s still a hero of mine. I hope he doesn’t object to the title.

He directed his latest effort, Synecdoche, New York. I highly recommend it, but fair warning, it will show you what you might be afraid to see and you might have a bad couple of days.

The last thing I would like to leave you with is something else I’ve realized while undertaking this little project… most people can’t tell a story with video.

I feel completely confident in that.

Xtranormal has a showcase for videos made with their technology. I’ve watched all of the “featured,” “most recent,” “most viewed,” “most discussed,” and “top rated” videos. Their technology is easy to use, and yet all of the videos are terrible.

There is a world of difference between using video to dramatically tell a story and Internet video at large.

Storytellers take heart; cheapening technology won’t cheapen storytelling.

May 2010 bring you happiness…

- J Roland Kelly

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Screenwriting & Filmmaking: My Celebrity Cause; Ralph Baker & Larry Norman; Brian Lilly, Dzenan Ahmetovic, Sean Coutts, Mark Spencer, and Other Phoenix Police Officers Going to Prison; Ending Police Brutality, the Piggy and a Plea for Help

Posted by – October 11, 2009

Some things make me so angry I can’t think straight. Police brutality and corruption is one.

Today I saw in the news the story of Tony Arambula.

Watch this from CNN first.

I recommend clicking-on-through to YouTube and reading the full description on the side.

This incident is now making national news because a 911 tape has been released, which picked up the cops immediately plotting a cover-up, and it exposes the lies that the Phoenix Police Department told after the fact.

The area of the United States I grew up in is notorious for police corruption, I am very sensitive to this, and when I see news about police brutality, it lingers with me.

If I’m ever on a celebrity game show, there’s no question as to what cause I’ll be raising money.

I’ve officially decided trying to stop police brutality, corruption, and misconduct is now my bag. I’ve been considering “my bag” for awhile.

After seeing the video of the UCLA student tasered by University police in the Powell Library, a couple of years ago (see how the case was resolved), I started thinking, and looking for macro solutions.

The best my mental processer cycles can devise is a website. It would work like this…

First, it would link to news stories about police misconduct, to try to expose, and raise awareness of the problem- of course.

It would provide information about how to file a complaint, if someone felt that they were wronged, and explain your legal protections to do so.

These are givens; here’s what would really make it work…

The bad cop award.

A visitor to the site could tell their story and nominate a police officer for a misconduct in the line of duty award. To sensationalize the award and make it memorable, the award would be known as a “piggy.”

The visitor nominating a police officer for this award could attach their name or remain anonymous.

The technical IT part of the bad cop award, would more or less work like this… the visitor fills out a form, the information generates a webpage using a html template search engine optimized for the name of the offending officer and the police department. A cron job runs a site index generator through the new pages to make sure they get indexed in the major search engines as fast as possible.

This SEOed-out name optimized webpage IS the award.

When someone Googles or Bings the police officer’s name or the name of the department, the award presents itself.

This site would go one step farther; it would offer the visitor a printable certificate copy of the award including the address of the police department to which the visitor could physically mail the certificate of shame, letting that officer know that he or she will forever be linked on the Internet to misconduct.

The site maybe able to get the addresses of police departments around the country by searching Google Maps for “police” and the zip code, Google gives the addresses if it’s possible to strip everything else.

Anyway, imagine a corrupt rural sheriff (Ralph Baker, soon to be a movie) or this urban Phoenix police officer Brian Lilly getting thousands of letters (piggy awards) sent to their department praising them for a bad job.

Imagine the awkwardness of a cop receiving just one.

I’m sorry, but the Greek chorus has spoken… here’s your piggy!

Big city, little town, rural, it doesn’t matter- no police misconduct would be immune. From a traffic ticket given for out of State plates, to the verbal threats, and escalation that cops use during routine procedures, the general public would finally have an outlet.

Statistics about police misconduct from the website could be gathered, problems in the nation isolated.

If a cop wanted to sue, good luck with that, social media is a beast, and so is the ACLU.

Something like this could work, I see people doing this in unorganized forms already. It’s not wise to trust cops to police cops, giving them exclusivity over the criminal domain.

Terrence Duren, the UCLA cop (that DICKLESS piece of sh!t is STILL a university cop!) the one that tasered the kid in the library was found not to have violated any polices by an internal investigation, an independent investigation found the complete opposite and UCLA recently settled with the victim.

Brian Lilly, the Phoenix cop in the above story that shot the homeowner first in the back, three more times, and then twice when he was on the ground, was cleared of wrongdoing by a Phoenix police board, and now that the 911 tape came out, that police board and every individual on it is a laughingstock.

It’s a good thing those laughingstocks and most other police commissions, boards, internal reviews, etc. are confidential.

Brian Lilly maybe a shooter of an innocent family man in the back, but the other police officers (Sgt. Sean Coutts, etc.) agreed to go along for the ride. They tried to isolate the wounded man until he died, to cover up their tracks, but he didn’t die. I wonder if anyone has applied any RICO type/ racketeering laws to a thoroughly corrupt police force. IANAL.

Officer Mark Spencer, president of the Phoenix Law Enforcement Association, rallied around the police officers claiming that Tony Arambula wasn’t shot in the back. Medical experts now say otherwise, the 911 tapes now prove otherwise, Mark Spencer is a fool, and a disgrace to the profession. As far as I’m concerned, he’s is now apart of the cover-up.

I’m mad as hell and I’m not going to take it anymore.

Using the Internet to shame cops into behaving may not be the best way to expose and stop police brutality, corruption, and misconduct, but none-the-less I’m officially putting my back into this police corruption business.

If there’s a better way, I’m listening, until then…

If you are a PHP guy who knows how to have a good time (anonymously, if you must), or you are Tony Arambula and want to donate some of what will be your six million dollar settlement to prevent future abuse by police (and like social experiments), shoot me an email.

I’ll try to show you a good time.

I’ve organized LLCs, & have marketing and SEO experience. I’ll donate time. I’ll donate an aged domain: www.stop-police-brutality.com. I’ve written several screenplays, if I have to write, I’ll write. If I have to fold envelopes, I’ll fold envelopes. Sweep floors, sweep floors.

I’m ready to get out of my comfort zone on this. I’m not absolutely certain how to proceed, but my mind and heart is now in it.

Ralph Baker, Larry Norman, Brian Lilly, Dzenan Ahmetovic, Sean Coutts, Mark Spencer, and Terrence Duren, I’m sorry, but the Greek chorus has spoken… here’s your piggy!

- J Roland Kelly

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Screenwriting & Filmmaking: More about the Oncoming Real 3D Revolution

Posted by – March 31, 2009

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Last year I wrote about going to see Journey to the Center of the Earth because it was in new Real 3D and I wanted to see what all the talk was about.

I then quickly added myself to the bandwagon of people who believed this new 3D was going to change filmmaking forever.

What I didn’t know is how far along this was getting, I read an interview with Steven Spielberg, Peter Jackson, and James Cameron.

What they had to say surprised even me.

First let me say, if asked to come up with three filmmakers that I like the least, it probably would be this trio, but this group does represent the top of mainstream filmmaking, which makes what they had to say even more remarkable…

All of them have big budget 3D films currently in production, all of them believe that 3D is the future, and James Cameron went as far as to say that he would never make a movie in 2D again.

On a side note there is apparently a way to take a current 2D movie and turn it into 3D with a lot of money and computer power. So…

James Cameron is currently working on a re-release of a 3D version of Titanic, and even George Lucas wants to re-re-release the Star Wars films in 3D.

Here is why the industry likes 3D… the theaters can charge more money for a ticket, the films can’t be bootlegged as easily (good for the Hollywood moneymen), but James Cameron stressed an interesting third point… and I wonder how much research has been done on this… he said seeing something in 3D draws from real memories in the brain differently than something in 2D.

That is 3D draws you into the storytelling process more effectively than 2D.

From what I know, I would guess he is right. In fact this 3D development could be the beginning of a larger concept of virtual reality entertainment.

If you haven’t seen one of these films yet I recommend you do, you will see that this new 3D doesn’t get in the way of the story at all, it might actually emphasize it.

One of the biggest tests of this new filmmaking development will occur this winter when Cameron releases Avatar, currently the largest production of a 3D film to date.

The film is not finished but Cameron has already spent more than $200 million, and more than 1000 people have worked on it.

Who is this guy?

And who keeps giving him money?

It will have to be these mainstream filmmakers that push the boundaries of this new medium, they are the only ones with that kind of bank, but I object to productions of this magnitude.

…100 well financed independent films or one film by James Cameron…

I hope it flops.

It might actually, because if 3D is the only hook for this film, then the worldwide receipts are going to be slim.

Hollywood is having enough trouble getting theaters in the United States to switch to digital projectors that can show 3D, the rest of the world right now… forget it.

The worldwide market was a huge source of income for Titanic, I remember seeing Titanic candy bars for sale in Lithuania.

I’m sure it will be released in 2D and it might be ok.

But did I mention that he is re-releasing Titanic, I’m going to hope for the worst.

-J Roland Kelly

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Screenwriting & Filmmaking: Two Film Ideas – a place where everyone lives to 100 & a guy who loses his manhood

Posted by – February 10, 2009

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If anyone needs ideas, here are two that I will never use.

First, in true reality, there’s this town in Ecuador close to Peru called Loja where an abnormal amount of people live past 100 years of age.

I know a girl whose grandmother is from Loja and I bought ice cream for her 94th birthday; she’s still going strong.

But no one knows why. What is it about this town? Is it the mountain air, diet & healthy living, maybe it’s aliens (good or bad), maybe just the CIA?

It could start as a romantic comedy and then go aliens.

If you figure it out, let me know.

The other idea, and this is so obvious that it has to have been done already, but I can’t think of a example…

A guy… a normal guy… and then out of nowhere he loses his penis… an accident… I don’t know…

So what happens to the guy?

Does he become a serial killer? Is he able to push through it? Is he middle aged, and doesn’t like to fcuk his wife anyway?

It could be a heart-warming story about a guy who shows us all that life is magical and can endure anything.

Or he could kill every swinging dick in his apartment complex.

Maybe, he kills women because he can’t find any release, or maybe he finds the healthy relationship with a woman that he always needed.

I promise you this, every single guy has thought about this. If you add a female character, as in the partner then you have story that applies to every single person on this planet.

That’s one hell of a built in audience.

Just think of me when that beautiful bank teller is staring you down.

-J Roland Kelly

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Screenwriting, Filmmaking, Storytelling & Life: The Hypocrisy of Film, How to Tell a Violent Story, & Why Never to Save an Attorney in Film, Plus J Roland Kelly Calls For the Resignation of James Bond and Batman

Posted by – January 12, 2009

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The hypocrisy of film works like this… in an epic for example… a peaceful society… suddenly gets attacked by an evil society (usually one-dimensional evil society).

We as an audience always follow a group of people from the peaceful society who chose to fight the evil society; this is Star Wars, Lord of the Rings, Beowulf, etc.

Why this format? Well, we as human beings want to live vicariously through a story full of action (read violence), but we have to rationalize this by adding black and white elements… The good guys are always the one-dimensional peaceful guys (who don’t want to fight, but you know, have to), the bad guys aren’t.

This makes it possible to enjoy a violent story. If the story were about the bad guys or simply two hours of people attacking each other, only a few of the odder people out there could stomach it.

The hypocrisy is that the reason why we are in the theater at all is because we like violence. That’s just how it works; another example…

I remember seeing a movie poster for a documentary about the Asian sex slave trade. The poster was of a scantily clad Asian girl chained in the corner of a room.

HOT!

That’s entertainment (hypocrisy)! Who doesn’t want a sex slave?

You show me a scantily clad Asian girl in chains, and depending on my current level of self-esteem, I’ll show you the price of admission.

What makes all this hot subject matter possible in mixed company is by putting it in the context of a documentary about white slavery.

It is just drama; pure hypocrisy.

The black and white elements need to be present, for the story to be stomach-able.

I have noticed recently that Hollywood is “f”ing this up, a la the new James Bond, Quantum of Solace and the newest Batman, The Dark Knight.

Hollywood in an attempt to address complicated modern times (George W. Bush’s mess) is trying to soften the black & white (good & evil) elements needed in violent storytelling.

The story then falls apart.

I like Hollywood because with MOST multi-million dollar stories, at least 100 really talented storytellers look at the story from 100 different angles and fix it.

James Bond and Batman fail.

In Quantum of Solace, James Bond is presented with an elder retired spy who tells James how difficult it is sometimes to know the difference between the good guys and the bad guys.

Then that spy is killed leaving James… the archetype of the grim fighting hero whose troubles are always private.

This is bullsh!t. James Bond can’t drive from point A to point B without causing four fatalities. You put him in a gray world and he is a common murder.

In the film, I think it’s telling that they have to make the Latin American dictator a rapist. It makes no sense in the grand scheme of the film, but otherwise the audience would feel bad him when James Bond’s chicky kills him.

He’s just a pawn in a game, and why am I watching a story about an entire spy network needed to take down one South American rapist?

I hate James Bond. I present him as the character, who has had the most negative impact in the real world.

Spy networks don’t work. Spy vs. spy doesn’t work. Fcuk the CIA. Worldwide Intelligence in real life is a fraud.

James Bond is a throw back to the Cold War and needs to be retired. Modern world politics has moved on, and James Bond is a liability.

I resent most, the people in power, who think James Bond is real i.e. effeminate males trying to play him, such as Henry Kissinger, Donald Rumsfeld, George W., etc.

James Bond your services are no longer needed. Bugger off.

The thesis of this entire rant is that the black & white elements of storytelling need to be present for violent (action) stories.

Batman: The Dark Knight was also a story that fell apart when they storytellers went from black & white to grey.

In the film, the Joker gives Batman a choice between saving his love interest, or the prosecuting attorney in Gotham for all the bad guys.

Batman chooses the lawyer (never save a lawyer), the girl dies, the lawyer goes on a killing spree because his love interest was the same dead girl, then Batman takes the heat for the prosecuting attorney and goes into a hunted exile, because he believes that Gotham needs to believe that the prosecuting attorney was a hero.

Damn, who is this self sacrificing Jesus who won’t die? They call him Batman.

If Batman just chose to save his girlfriend (never save a lawyer) then the prosecuting attorney would have died a hero’s death, and all of this could have been avoided. Or, he could have simply told the truth and got credit for the capturing the Joker.

This is a terrible story. The irony is not lost on me that The Dark Knight has been one of the more financially successful Batman films, do to the untimely death of Heath Ledger.

Still, it is bad storytelling.

Hollywood, lately feels it can violate 3000 years of storytelling structure because of the political failure of one presidential administration. It can’t.

Hollywood, recognize.

-J Roland Kelly

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