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Screenplays & Screenwriting Resources: The Screenwriter’s Bible by David Trottier – Reviewed

Posted by – April 27, 2009

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I’ve read a few books on screenwriting now, the largest and heaviest of which has been The Screenwriter’s Bible by David Trottier. The book isn’t that long or wordy, so much as the print and the physical pages are large.

I guess a big, heavy, large print book seems more authoritative then and small little print one. It does make a noticeable difference for a traveling expat screenwriter though.

Anyway the “Bible” is billed as six books in one: a screenwriting primer, a screenwriting workbook, a formatting guide, a spec writing guide, a sales and marketing guide, and finally a screenwriter’s resource guide.

I would absolutely recommend this book.

I can’t think of anything I have against this book, other than I can tell David Trottier isn’t a fanatic about three act structure, a lot of people aren’t, I am however not one of those, so I would have to recommend another book (probably The Complete Idiot’s Guide to Screenwriting by Skip Press) to really drive the three act structure concept home.

The other strange thing about reading so many screenwriting “guru” books is that everyone wants to coin their own vocabulary, as a result certain concepts get named and renamed and named again. Is it twist, plot point, turning point, etc.?

This is where the book excels over the other books I’ve read: the primer, the formatting guide, and the sales & marketing guide.

It will clear up any misconceptions about what and why you should be writing a “spec” script as oppose to all the shooting scripts you download from the Internet.

As basic as it sounds I actually gained a lot from this, older screenplays and shooting scripts have such a different style (camera direction, etc.) it’s hard not let those bleed into your writing.

I feel that this book cleared up some of the basic misconceptions I had about what is a screenplay.

The formatting guide is great for reference. While there is no absolutely correct way of formatting, Trottier’s guide is a quick and easy way for finding industry-accepted techniques.

He makes it easy to reference by boiling everything down into a three-page screenplay. Get familiar with those three pages and you’ll be set for your own application of those techniques.

Lastly, his sales and marketing guide is like nothing else I have seen. He lists concrete steps to take after finishing your screenplay.

Reading this section is inspiring, at least in that there will be something to do with your screenplay after it is written.

This book is strong on basics and I recommend it to everyone.

-J Roland Kelly

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Recommended Things To Do When You Are Staring Down Screenwriter’s Block In Quito, Ecuador: Bike the Ciclopaseo

Posted by – March 17, 2009

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On the second and last Sunday of every month, Quito closes its main drag (the Avenida Amazonas) to all traffic but bikes.

Usually this city is not a bicycle friendly city, the traffic, the mountains, the pollution, etc. but on two days a month everything changes.

Suddenly everyone is on a bike, the city provides water stops along the main route, which extends from the south of Quito all the way to the airport in the north.

I “borrowed” a kid’s bike from a kid in the center of the Parque La Alemeda and rode all the way to the airport.

This is a great way to see Quito, you will pass through El Centro, the Mariscal Sucre, and Parque La Carolina all before watching a plane take off or land at the airport because the route goes right by the runway.

Everyone stops, drinks from their water bottle, watches one plane by the runway and then heads back.

I recommend this for tourists or expats alike. I did it two Sundays ago on Women’s day and it rocked.

I did return the bike.

-J Roland Kelly

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Screenwriting and Screenplay Contests: Tips, Tricks & Getting Feedback

Posted by – February 26, 2009

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I don’t enter many contests but NYC Midnight puts on this event every year, sponsored by Final Draft, that I enter. I just signed up again, this will be my third time.

It’s not a typical screenwriting contest, here’s how it works.

They assign you to a heat with specific topic and genre for example, Mother & science fiction, and then you have one week to write a 15-page screenplay.

The best few from each heat go to round two (about 30 people) where everyone gets the same topic and genre and you have to write another 15-page screenplay in 24 hours.

The best part about this contest is the forum that you can choose to post your screenplay entry into after the end of each round; mostly it’s amateurs, and mostly everyone is kind.

I have received a lot of good feed back every time I have posted one of my screenplays in the forum.

Here is what I have learned. Most of the good screenplays are expressionist. They try to focus on a single emotion, usually about something real personal.

15 pages isn’t long enough to develop a whole lot of story so if you can convey an emotion, you have done something.

Most of the people who participate in the forum are amateurs. Most of the people who win the contest are not beginners, and they do not participate in the forum, so it seems like most of the winners come out of nowhere.

This is okay.

It’s still a good exercise to force yourself to write on a given topic, and the fee for entering the contest is very low.

Totally worth it, I recommend this contest.

-J Roland Kelly

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Screenwriting & Filmmaking: Two Film Ideas – a place where everyone lives to 100 & a guy who loses his manhood

Posted by – February 10, 2009

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If anyone needs ideas, here are two that I will never use.

First, in true reality, there’s this town in Ecuador close to Peru called Loja where an abnormal amount of people live past 100 years of age.

I know a girl whose grandmother is from Loja and I bought ice cream for her 94th birthday; she’s still going strong.

But no one knows why. What is it about this town? Is it the mountain air, diet & healthy living, maybe it’s aliens (good or bad), maybe just the CIA?

It could start as a romantic comedy and then go aliens.

If you figure it out, let me know.

The other idea, and this is so obvious that it has to have been done already, but I can’t think of a example…

A guy… a normal guy… and then out of nowhere he loses his penis… an accident… I don’t know…

So what happens to the guy?

Does he become a serial killer? Is he able to push through it? Is he middle aged, and doesn’t like to fcuk his wife anyway?

It could be a heart-warming story about a guy who shows us all that life is magical and can endure anything.

Or he could kill every swinging dick in his apartment complex.

Maybe, he kills women because he can’t find any release, or maybe he finds the healthy relationship with a woman that he always needed.

I promise you this, every single guy has thought about this. If you add a female character, as in the partner then you have story that applies to every single person on this planet.

That’s one hell of a built in audience.

Just think of me when that beautiful bank teller is staring you down.

-J Roland Kelly

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Travel & Restaurants: Quito, Ecuador – Mistranslated American and Ecuadorian Cultural Symbols

Posted by – December 16, 2008

I’m still in Quito, and I continue to find things that are still new to me. I’m going to say as few words about the following pictures as possible.

Let me say the name of the restaurant, Menestras del Negro translated into English is something like Black Guy Beans.

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Notice the black guy. If you look closely at the menu, you will see an African guy hunting a dinosaur with a spear. Now, everyone knows the Chinese are the only ones in the modern era to hunt dinosaurs for food. But before you say, “oh, Ecuador is like that.” Check this out.

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Old man Sanders and a guy with a bone fork in his hair together side by side. Fried chicken and beans- tasty. It´s all fun and games except for this restaurant.

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This by the way is just a Catholic church suit, as you might have figured out the restaurant is in a renovated church. But in case you think I´m seeing things that aren´t there, this is the front door of the restaurant.

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Imagine seeing your refection in a door like that.

- J Roland Kelly

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