Tag: Screenplays

Screenwriting Cross Training: Picking up Additional Skills of Filmmaking by Animating, Directing, and Editing a Written Scene, Social Media Gurus, Jean-Luc Godard Sleeping with Charlie Kaufman, and a Hopeful Future for Storytellers

Posted by – January 20, 2010

I’ve found a way for a screenwriter to quickly and painlessly animate a simple scene…

When running in old circles a month ago, I came across this comic computer-animated video from Markham Nolan showing the very delicate soft sell technique of a true social media professional.

How NOT to be a Social Media Guru

At the end is an ad for the technology that was used to create the animation.

I looked into it.

The text-to-movie technology from Xtranormal is billed as so easy if you can type, you can make movies, and it took two seconds before I decided to animate a scene from one of my screenplays.

I picked a scene; it’s one of my firsts but a favorite… so keep reading.

Animating it turned out to be really beneficial, it increased my understanding of what others are doing when they interpret my writing, and in the process I learned something about the language of editing.

It’s always best to be able to explain your vision in terms that other people in the production chain understand.

For a screenwriter who is still trying to increase their power to visualize a scene, I can see how animating something that they’ve written could really help.

With almost no effort this software allows you to create a computer-generated set with computer-generated actors to talk out simple scenes.

The online version of the software (which I recommend for its simplicity) is a little limited, as is real life, and even that’s a great lesson as there will always be a space between a script and its fruition.

In the last year, I’ve tried to learn a little about some of the peripheral arts around screenwriting. I’ve read books on acting, directing, editing, etc. and amazingly it all came into play even at this simplistic level.

Concepts like looking for emotion on a character’s face (or lack of it), knowing that some lines should be given while some should be received, and different ideas about editing for continuity when arranging shots were really brought home for me during this little exercise.

And remember the lesson was free.

One of the biggest filmmaking ideas I came to understand was the director’s concept of “coverage,” basically getting enough footage for editing; something as simple as three takes, three different ways, from three different angles.

This is the magical time when you find out everything your film will NOT be.

As great and as perfect as you think your story might be in screenplay form, it must take on substance sometime.

Godard is quoted as saying “editing is the transformation of chance into destiny.”

The online version of the software only allows for a limited number of camera angles, it’s about ten but that’s more coverage than you could probably expect in the real world.

This allows for the aspiring filmmaker to experiment.  After getting close-ups, shots from the waist up, over the shoulder shots, even some Dutch angles, it’s possible to change the script, and instantly have perfect reshoots from all angles.

Animating a scene from a project with this software is a fast and inexpensive way of developing or finding a style.

Many years ago I saw La Passion de Jeanne d’Arc, a film by Carl Theodor Dreyer from way back in 1928. I recommend it to all. As the title suggests the film is extremely emotional, a lot of tight close-ups of people crying.

Someone in the DVD extras explains that this is ironic because Dreyer went to great expense to build elaborate sets, only to draw the focus away with tight close-ups.

I thought well… why not save a few bucks on the set and just shoot close ups?

The establishing shot is the answer.

Most people with even a passing interest in film have heard these terms, but until you actually edit a film, it’s difficult to understand the power that they hold.

The audience feels uncomfortable not knowing where they are, even if the action is engaging.

It’s true on the screen; it’s true on the page.

Back to my little scene, arranged as a short film now: it’s about the role of third parties in the sexual fantasy life of couples.

I was going for a 50 year old La Nouvelle Vague, over saturated, deep focus, sort of a Jean-Luc Godard meets Charlie Kaufman but animated in 1 minute and 52 seconds affair.

I give you Sleeping with Charlie Kaufman.

Kaufman’s still a hero of mine. I hope he doesn’t object to the title.

He directed his latest effort, Synecdoche, New York. I highly recommend it, but fair warning, it will show you what you might be afraid to see and you might have a bad couple of days.

The last thing I would like to leave you with is something else I’ve realized while undertaking this little project… most people can’t tell a story with video.

I feel completely confident in that.

Xtranormal has a showcase for videos made with their technology. I’ve watched all of the “featured,” “most recent,” “most viewed,” “most discussed,” and “top rated” videos. Their technology is easy to use, and yet all of the videos are terrible.

There is a world of difference between using video to dramatically tell a story and Internet video at large.

Storytellers take heart; cheapening technology won’t cheapen storytelling.

May 2010 bring you happiness…

- J Roland Kelly

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Screenwriting & Filmmaking: My Celebrity Cause; Ralph Baker & Larry Norman; Brian Lilly, Dzenan Ahmetovic, Sean Coutts, Mark Spencer, and Other Phoenix Police Officers Going to Prison; Ending Police Brutality, the Piggy and a Plea for Help

Posted by – October 11, 2009

Some things make me so angry I can’t think straight. Police brutality and corruption is one.

Today I saw in the news the story of Tony Arambula.

Watch this from CNN first.

I recommend clicking-on-through to YouTube and reading the full description on the side.

This incident is now making national news because a 911 tape has been released, which picked up the cops immediately plotting a cover-up, and it exposes the lies that the Phoenix Police Department told after the fact.

The area of the United States I grew up in is notorious for police corruption, I am very sensitive to this, and when I see news about police brutality, it lingers with me.

If I’m ever on a celebrity game show, there’s no question as to what cause I’ll be raising money.

I’ve officially decided trying to stop police brutality, corruption, and misconduct is now my bag. I’ve been considering “my bag” for awhile.

After seeing the video of the UCLA student tasered by University police in the Powell Library, a couple of years ago (see how the case was resolved), I started thinking, and looking for macro solutions.

The best my mental processer cycles can devise is a website. It would work like this…

First, it would link to news stories about police misconduct, to try to expose, and raise awareness of the problem- of course.

It would provide information about how to file a complaint, if someone felt that they were wronged, and explain your legal protections to do so.

These are givens; here’s what would really make it work…

The bad cop award.

A visitor to the site could tell their story and nominate a police officer for a misconduct in the line of duty award. To sensationalize the award and make it memorable, the award would be known as a “piggy.”

The visitor nominating a police officer for this award could attach their name or remain anonymous.

The technical IT part of the bad cop award, would more or less work like this… the visitor fills out a form, the information generates a webpage using a html template search engine optimized for the name of the offending officer and the police department. A cron job runs a site index generator through the new pages to make sure they get indexed in the major search engines as fast as possible.

This SEOed-out name optimized webpage IS the award.

When someone Googles or Bings the police officer’s name or the name of the department, the award presents itself.

This site would go one step farther; it would offer the visitor a printable certificate copy of the award including the address of the police department to which the visitor could physically mail the certificate of shame, letting that officer know that he or she will forever be linked on the Internet to misconduct.

The site maybe able to get the addresses of police departments around the country by searching Google Maps for “police” and the zip code, Google gives the addresses if it’s possible to strip everything else.

Anyway, imagine a corrupt rural sheriff (Ralph Baker, soon to be a movie) or this urban Phoenix police officer Brian Lilly getting thousands of letters (piggy awards) sent to their department praising them for a bad job.

Imagine the awkwardness of a cop receiving just one.

I’m sorry, but the Greek chorus has spoken… here’s your piggy!

Big city, little town, rural, it doesn’t matter- no police misconduct would be immune. From a traffic ticket given for out of State plates, to the verbal threats, and escalation that cops use during routine procedures, the general public would finally have an outlet.

Statistics about police misconduct from the website could be gathered, problems in the nation isolated.

If a cop wanted to sue, good luck with that, social media is a beast, and so is the ACLU.

Something like this could work, I see people doing this in unorganized forms already. It’s not wise to trust cops to police cops, giving them exclusivity over the criminal domain.

Terrence Duren, the UCLA cop (that DICKLESS piece of sh!t is STILL a university cop!) the one that tasered the kid in the library was found not to have violated any polices by an internal investigation, an independent investigation found the complete opposite and UCLA recently settled with the victim.

Brian Lilly, the Phoenix cop in the above story that shot the homeowner first in the back, three more times, and then twice when he was on the ground, was cleared of wrongdoing by a Phoenix police board, and now that the 911 tape came out, that police board and every individual on it is a laughingstock.

It’s a good thing those laughingstocks and most other police commissions, boards, internal reviews, etc. are confidential.

Brian Lilly maybe a shooter of an innocent family man in the back, but the other police officers (Sgt. Sean Coutts, etc.) agreed to go along for the ride. They tried to isolate the wounded man until he died, to cover up their tracks, but he didn’t die. I wonder if anyone has applied any RICO type/ racketeering laws to a thoroughly corrupt police force. IANAL.

Officer Mark Spencer, president of the Phoenix Law Enforcement Association, rallied around the police officers claiming that Tony Arambula wasn’t shot in the back. Medical experts now say otherwise, the 911 tapes now prove otherwise, Mark Spencer is a fool, and a disgrace to the profession. As far as I’m concerned, he’s is now apart of the cover-up.

I’m mad as hell and I’m not going to take it anymore.

Using the Internet to shame cops into behaving may not be the best way to expose and stop police brutality, corruption, and misconduct, but none-the-less I’m officially putting my back into this police corruption business.

If there’s a better way, I’m listening, until then…

If you are a PHP guy who knows how to have a good time (anonymously, if you must), or you are Tony Arambula and want to donate some of what will be your six million dollar settlement to prevent future abuse by police (and like social experiments), shoot me an email.

I’ll try to show you a good time.

I’ve organized LLCs, & have marketing and SEO experience. I’ll donate time. I’ll donate an aged domain: www.stop-police-brutality.com. I’ve written several screenplays, if I have to write, I’ll write. If I have to fold envelopes, I’ll fold envelopes. Sweep floors, sweep floors.

I’m ready to get out of my comfort zone on this. I’m not absolutely certain how to proceed, but my mind and heart is now in it.

Ralph Baker, Larry Norman, Brian Lilly, Dzenan Ahmetovic, Sean Coutts, Mark Spencer, and Terrence Duren, I’m sorry, but the Greek chorus has spoken… here’s your piggy!

- J Roland Kelly

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